Still...
This tendered song breaks and splits, parsed
with hope of meaning or at least some meager image
of light or death
or the hint of a harmony.
Does meaning nest quietly
behind the veil?
Resting like the dead beneath the thin soil
and thinner air. Is it
grasped like smoke
or sentiment?
Can it be bound or
fettered, caught and trained
to stand and
expound?
Does it peck at the living,
searching for mites of
consciousness with
its beaks of flame? Or,
is it silent in its sleep,
casting dreams against
the seabed where they rest, stunned,
in wait
of the end of ends?
Sing freely and loud. Or stamp the soil into stone
and press the wind against the flat of your hand;
palm the breeze. Lick at the sky and its blinding
depths. Strike against the blue that hides, or the
darkness that goes and goes.
And maybe, just, you'll hear the sound of
singing. Angels' tongues licking too, Heaven's fists
striking the taught skins of worlds, stamping
as from molds the spirits of man and the tinkling gears
of ethereal animation. Palming meaning into chords
and thoughts that ring,
binding breath with dust or bones.
Being becoming being and
splitting, still.

Hi Love, i love. you and poem. but i would change these things:
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and press the wind against the flat of your hand;
palm the breeze. Lick at the sky and its blinding
depths. Strike against the blue that hides, or the
darkness that goes and goes.
And maybe, just, you'll hear the sound of singing."
I would take out both "just"s, the one in the first line I quoted and the one in the last line. They sound a bit contrived or unnatural to me.
Otherwise, beautiful.